Peer Review

Project 1 Fence Animation
Student name: Lawrence Ma Student Number: 3159854
Reviewer name: Harold Legaspi Student Number: 3134743



VIDEO:

1] Narrative/Thematics
Theoretical framework and the strength of initial investigation
Story boarding, visual research, testing of ideas and initial
investigation into max
8/10

Comments:
… I wonder why I help people out only to find out they get better stuff.
The lighting… It’s good. The linking part is missing in some sense
but it’s a minor repairing.

2] Max Component
Complexity of form and motion. Conceptualization of source
imagery/documentation, testing methods and processes
of form generation etc.
8/10

Comments:
The methods of testing are good. Good animation testing.
You get an idea of the thing. In a sense it is suppose
to be thinking lateral so it is very abstract. It works but I hate
this assignment on how it is not about being literal. Your
description is a potential concept. It’s a really good concept.
Though in the end… I didn’t see the woman part. In your concept idea,
I wanted to see something that related to a woman. Like something alluring
to it. Wait… the last glowing light bulb thing had that idea. GOOD JOB!

3] Video Editing Component
Structure of narrative, background/foreground resolution, integration
of source images, text and sound into animation. Resolution/readability
of work and concepts.
7/10

Comments:
The editing seemed not connected enough but that is easy to fix
with a minor repairing.

Misc comments:
In general, I love it… perhaps I shouldn’t give you any help with
the lighting. I liked the video. Can’t wait to see how you go with
the next assignment. You are PSYCHO… I heard from Danni that
you did that thing in vray…
So kudos to you.

Perhaps you can play with self emitting lamps and more stuff.